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Rating Orb Jakers 18 Australia PhlegmaticMelancholic 39C 3F
6 years ago | (1)
It's just a bit clunky, and reading your responses to comments, I don't think you actually speak like that. The problem with your sentence structure is that it sounds unnatural, so just write it as if you're saying it to one of your friends. That way, you'll get a nicely flowing paragraph, and if you fill it with the kind of content that this review contains, you can't go wrong.