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Rating Orb Fatalis, True Neutral Philosopher – joined 9 years ago MARDEK 3 Bug Reports76.210.XXX.XXX7 years ago
ATTENTION EVERYONE:

The reason your keys get stuck is because you are using internet explorer. Download a new browser and they will work.
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Rating Orb Fatalis, True Neutral Philosopher – joined 9 years ago Bob's (possibly Magic) Quest!76.210.XXX.XXX8 years ago
This is a simple game where the person that posts next will add on to the sentence I will write. First, the rules:

1. You cannot say "HE DIED GAME OVER!".
2. Please make your sentence reasonable.
3. Only one sentence per add.

I will start.

Bob, a simple citizen of Randompolis, journied out into the land armed with nothing but a knife and some simple clothes....

Next person will add on to the story. You should also copy the last sentences, to make it easier to understand.
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Rating Orb Fatalis, True Neutral Philosopher – joined 9 years ago New weapon ideas76.210.XXX.XXX9 years ago
I say, some halo weapons might work.

Maybe the gravity hammer or energy sword (as secret weapons)

Flintlocks could work.

Maybe some sort of device that can trap an enemy, thus stunning it.

Some sort of huge cannon with soldier allies (if there is an invasion of some sort).

Back on to halo, maybe we could get some weapons from the aliens (gah, damn, forgot their names. Haven't played the game in ages)
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Rating Orb Fatalis, True Neutral Philosopher – joined 9 years ago MARDEK 3 Saving System76.210.XXX.XXX9 years ago
You should add save points in the game, but at least make sure you add it before a boss, always! I hate when I run up to a boss, fight him, and in the middle of a battle when Mardek has 12 hp left, I remember I forgot to save since the beginning of the 2 hour long area.
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Rating Orb Fatalis, True Neutral Philosopher – joined 9 years ago A serious question76.210.XXX.XXX9 years ago
It will keep being updated into the real thing, as Pseudo said before. *waits to receive violation*
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Rating Orb Fatalis, True Neutral Philosopher – joined 9 years ago The Phoenixa Chronicles Book One76.210.XXX.XXX9 years ago
Ok, thank you everyone! I will try to work on it more. And I try to make it as long as I can, but it is always short! I need to take some writing classes, lol. I'll try to make it better.
EDIT: Ok, ive added a short chapter explaining some of the history and all that stuff.
Edit edit: And remember, this story is set about 100-200 years (10-20 for humans) before the actual story takes place.
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Rating Orb Fatalis, True Neutral Philosopher – joined 9 years ago *Spoiler* Techniques List76.210.XXX.XXX9 years ago
In VR, stats for disconnect

Learned by Monitor (power sprite)
10 mp
Effect: Sends opponents monster back to summoner (doesn't work on wild beasts)

Not sure about rest.
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Pandemic, Mardek's, blueshift, gods playing feild 1 and 2, tactical assassin, chaos faction, murloc (fun little rpg game), shadez, unreal flash. Theres my list.
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The Phoenixa Chronicles Book One: The Viaxe Chronicles (couldn't fit name in title)
A series i'm working on that will be from different points of important characters.

Part One: The Beginning of the End.
Prologue: First Blood
General Asfia looked to the sky. It was filled with dark clouds, a storm is coming, he thought. He looked around the massive 30 foot wall that surrounded a city. Nothing to be seen. He looked over to his left to look at the huge gate that blocked out intruders. He looked to his right to see a guard. Just like himself, it was a phoenixen; a huminoid bird creature with brownish-orange feathers. The guard was garbed in chainmail armor, weilding a bow and arrow with a short sword on his belt with his canteen. The temperature was the usual 103 degrees and there was a small wind. Asifa looked behind him to see the city in order. When he looked over the horizon, he saw something strange. It looked like an army of figures, but he could not see it well. Now the Figures were closer. "Can you see those?" Asifa asked the guard. "Well, yes, but I don't know what they could be." The guard replied. Little did they know that in a few hours, they would be fending for their lives.

Asifa quickly ducked below the arrow that flew past his head and shouted to his comrades. "Fire at will! Defend the gates!!! Do not let them break through!" He looked behind him to see his soldiers forming a defensive line of pikes in front of the gate. If they break through, they will have to get through them. He spun around just in time to see the arrow flying at him, but couldn't react fast enough. It bounced of his helm, but sent him flying towards the ground. Nearly falling off the wall, he lands on his stomach, half way off the wall. Asifa quickly scrambles up and notices his helm fell off when he got hit. Then his heart sinks as he hears a deafaning crack. Asifa gets up and looks over at the wall and sees huge cracks running up the gate, and at its base is an enemy battering ram. The enemy, to his surprise, is black phoenixens. "The Dark Phoenixes!!! Damnit!" Asifa runs over to a dead soldier who was killed by 2 arrow wounds to the chest; both piercing the mail. Asifa took of helm for his own, and continued dodging the arrows flying over the wall. CRACK! He looks over at the gate, they have nearly broken through! And the ram strikes again...CRACK!

Thousands of dead soldiers, from both sides, lay on the blood soaked ground. Thousands of blood stained weapons lay on the ground, some stabbing through soldiers. Body parts lay over the area, cut off by swords and axes. Asifa keeled by a wounded friend, before he was put on a strecher and taken to the medical area. Workers rebuild the gate and repair wall damage. Though they may have won, they suffered many deaths. If they were to attack like that again, we are doomed, Asifa thought. We would be wiped out. He walked through the streets, looking at every destroyed house, and the citizens walking around searching for remains of any food or water. Childeren crying and lovers weeping over there losses. If this happens again, there is nothing we can do to prevent an epidemic like this. He entered the palace, a large building where the king and queen lives. He looked back one last time to take in the destruction, and face the facts.


Chapter 2: The Chosen One
"We have suffered many fatalities, King Phoenix." Asifa announced to a figure sitting in a chair acrossed the table. "As it seems, we cannot hold back the Dark Phoenixes now." Said King Phoenix. "But what if they do attack again, my lord." Another person asked. "There is nothing to do, other than surrender." Asifa replied. "But K-He-will not take any prisoners." Another phoenixen said. "Maybe we should go into hiding?" Suggested another phoenixen. "No, no, we should wait until they attack again. They will be within sighting distance by time we evacuate." The king said. "But what if they surround us?" Asifa warned. "Then we will have a fight to the death on our hands." The king said grimly. "We will have to defend our kingdom at all costs."

Tejaul looked out the window of his room. He is coming, with a greater army. He looked out to the east to look at the lightning storm heading toward the kingdom. We do not have much time. He he will arrive soon. He looked down at his wrists, the right one in a gold bracer with a red gem and a black one with a purple gem. I am the chosen one, I must destroy Him! He thought. But, the question is, can you? The Voice of Light, a soul inside the gold bracer, reminded him. "I am sure that I can, or I will die trying." Tejaul said out loud.

A few hours later, Asifa kocked on Tejaul's door. "You must meet us at the training grounds, chosen one. We need you to be in your best state when He comes." Asifa demanded. "I understand, I will be there." Tejaul said back. Asifa walked out the door and down the hallway. You have more than enough training! You are masterful in swordsman ship, archery, bending, and magic! What more is there to learn! The Voice of Light sounded very insulted. With light magic...anc dark magic...you could easily kill anyone in your path! The Voice said again. You don't sound like the Voice of Light, more like the Voice of Darkness! A little bit more training wouldn't hurt! Tejaul thought back.


Chapter 3: Training
Tejaul climbed up the hill which leads to the training grounds, a large, flat area where soldiers would train with swords, spears, and bows. Tejaul was met by general Asifa, captain Tas'osa, and captain Em'or. "Welcome, chosen one! Please: Hand me your sword, we wouldn't want anyone to be killed here. You will fight with this wooden sword, as will the other soldiers." Tas'osa took Tejaul's sword and handed him a basic wooden sword. He faced 5 other warriors, 2 armed with wooden swords, 2 with wooden staffs and another with a sheild and wooden sword. He began in his usual pose-with his sword in one hand and facing at a 200 degree angle. First one of the staff warriors charged at him. Tejaul steped on the end of the staff and sent the warrior flying. Tejaul picked up the staff in his left hand and waited for the next attacker. After a few seconds, a swordsman charged up. Tejaul chucked the staff at him, and the end hit the soldier on the side of the cranium, knocking him out. Tejaul again waited for the next attack. This time, the swordsman and staff-weilder charged. Tejaul jumped up and kicked the staff weilder, then took his staff and poked the swordsman in the heart area, knocking him down.

Tejaul faced the last enemy. It seemed like hours until Tejaul struck first. The Soldier caught the sword in his sheild and struck back with a stab. Tejaul stepped to the side and struck again, but the sheild blocked the blade easily. The enemy used an overhead strike and barely missed Tejaul. Tejaul spun to the side and stuck the opponent in the back, and pushed him down. While he was on the ground, Tejaul pointed to his enemies throat. "Good job, chosen one! You have surpassed our soldiers! Here is your sword!" Tas'osa and Tejaul traded swords, Tejaul's wooden one for Tas'osa's Gift of the Ancients-any blade weilded by the chosen ones. "Your training is complete, hopefully it is enough!" Said Em'or to Tejaul.


Chapter 4: Memories
The phoenixens were once a proud race, but there is always an evil to be destroyed. His name is not to be repeated out loud, but I shall say it this once...Kuna. An evil ruler of an empire of mutated phoenixens, the Dark Phoenixes. Modified with dark energy, and turned into souless zombies, they serve under Kuna. Kuna cannot be destroyed, he is always reincarnated as himself, becoming more and more powerful and blood thirsty with every defeat. He is the ultimate evil, and easily surpasses the power of an ordinary soldier. Master of fire, water, earth, air, and darkness. Light he has no control over, being that he hates anything serving good.

The Chosen One, or "Y'ustkal", meaning "Light", is the one who can control every element, and has the power to destroy Kuna. His or her weapon can be anything he or she chooses. The enchant their weapon using their light powers and allow it to kill Kuna. They wear a gold bracer, "The Voice of Light" and a black bracer, "The Voice of Darkness." It is said that they can transform into powerful beings, one light, one dark and a powerful mix between the two. There is very little information on them, since they were nearly wiped out by Kuna in the Tara Ykim, or "War of Final Struggle."

Tejaul awoke with a start. Tara Ykim? The Y'ustkal were nearly wiped out? Where do I remember this from? He thought. Ah, yes, the War of Final Struggle. Our Chosen Ones were nearly wiped out, but that was thousands of years ago! And you never even learned about any of that! The Voice of Light said. It is strange. Tejaul thought before sleep enveloped him, and he collapsed onto his bed.









Next Book: The Phoenixa Chronicles Book 2: Evil Stirs
Next Series: The Mirror Wars (may change name)
Please comment on the story so far!
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It's just the alpha, MOST beasts cannot go past form 2, only 2 of them can, Gef being one of them. And yes I relize this post is short, but there is nothing I can do about it.
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